I'll give this a whirl in Mids when I get the chance, and mind you my Mids-Fu is quite weak (never got into IO sets too much, so....yeah) but off the bat I'd say some changes I'd make are to find a way to include Hurricane, Snow Storm, and while I usually (read: 99% of the time) take Super Jump myself, I feel that Hover/Fly would fit much better both for controlling some of the KB inherent in Storm, but also thematically.