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« on: May 20, 2013, 04:31:28 PM »
Hey folks...

I've noticed there are at least a few writers around here that have done fan-fiction stories of their characters, and it looks like some are still writing them now, even though our city is gone(for the moment, but Icon is giving me renewed hope!), but I got to wondering recently if anyone around here would be interested in the idea of doing "interactive" stories?

I've done one before (I started it on my SG's forums, and it made it a good ways in before interest petered off leaving the story unfinished...), and it was fun to try and write a story that evolved as other people added their own elements.

What is an Interactive Story you ask? Well (the way I've done it at least), it's sort of a fan-fiction version of "roleplaying". Essentially, an overall plot is chosen, then one person writes a chapter for the story introducing said plot. Then another person/writer introduces their character/s to the story in a chapter they write, and try and expand on the plot or advance the story a little. Then the next person does the same. Chapters can be as long or as short as you want, but if you wish for other people to use your character in their writing, be sure to provide good descriptions of your character as you introduce them (or ask the owner of said character in a PM if you're unsure on a detail about their character. Interaction is half the fun!).

New people can chime in at any time, so there's no limit to how many can join or when. The overall idea is to collaboratively tell a complete story that everyone (people involved or readers) can enjoy.

Things to avoid would be obvious things like purposely killing off of another person's characters, "I win" characters who show up and end the story "cause they're uber brokenly awesome", or changing another person's character to be different from how they are described (turning a male character female, changing powers, personality, exc.).

It's a great writing exercise working around what other people are writing, and can be a lot of fun done right. So, would anyone around here be interested in such a thing?


Edit: The story has begun, and can be found here: http://www.cohtitan.com/forum/index.php/topic,8514.0.html Please keep all comments and discussion to this thread. Now get out there and start writing!
« Last Edit: May 30, 2013, 07:19:19 PM by Shenku »

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Re: Anyone interested in doing an "Interactive Story"...?
« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2013, 01:42:32 AM »
Shenku sat back, having clicked the 'Post' button to start the new topic.  There was, of course, some trepidation about the response it would get, but that's ok.  Nothing ventured, nothing gained, right?  The excitement of the potential replies, the start of a new story, perhaps a grand collaboration, was just too much to ignore.  I hope we can do this, Shenku thought, I bet the Titan community would make a really great story.

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Elsewhere on the planet, while crusing the Internet and it's cornucopia of websites, houtex turned as he always did to the Titan Network's forums.  He checked it every day to see if there was any news regarding CoH's continuing comeback aspriations.  He just knows it will happen, it really isn't an option for it to...

"What's this?" he said, as he spotted the topic on the Titan Forums.  "'Interactive story'... another one?  Hm..."  He was intrigued by yet another attempt to start one of those.  houtex did have the bug to write things.  But he had his reservations.  Firstly, the people who wouldn't keep to the rules listed.  Secondly, there's always, ALWAYS 'that guy' who has to post something so off the wall, the story gets sidetracked worse than a Tom Clancy dead ended branch. 

People lose focus that way, he thought.

But... if it were possible to keep that sort of thing out... or perhaps vote in an edit and remove the offending piece of the story puzzle being made...

Perhaps it would work.

houtex decided that he'd keep an eye on the subject.  "I can always come up with something to add.  I just need to be sure to not force it.  I wonder if there'll be any other intrigued parties to this?"

At that point, yet again, houtex realized he was talking out loud to himself.  I really need to stop that. he thought, then went to see the Word Association thread, but not before silently congratulating himself for the correct spelling of 'cornucopia'.

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Re: Anyone interested in doing an "Interactive Story"...?
« Reply #2 on: May 25, 2013, 02:45:02 AM »
Shenku sat back, having clicked the 'Post' button to start the new topic.  There was, of course, some trepidation about the response it would get, but that's ok.  Nothing ventured, nothing gained, right?  The excitement of the potential replies, the start of a new story, perhaps a grand collaboration, was just too much to ignore.  I hope we can do this, Shenku thought, I bet the Titan community would make a really great story.

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Elsewhere on the planet, while crusing the Internet and it's cornucopia of websites, houtex turned as he always did to the Titan Network's forums.  He checked it every day to see if there was any news regarding CoH's continuing comeback aspriations.  He just knows it will happen, it really isn't an option for it to...

"What's this?" he said, as he spotted the topic on the Titan Forums.  "'Interactive story'... another one?  Hm..."  He was intrigued by yet another attempt to start one of those.  houtex did have the bug to write things.  But he had his reservations.  Firstly, the people who wouldn't keep to the rules listed.  Secondly, there's always, ALWAYS 'that guy' who has to post something so off the wall, the story gets sidetracked worse than a Tom Clancy dead ended branch. 

People lose focus that way, he thought.

But... if it were possible to keep that sort of thing out... or perhaps vote in an edit and remove the offending piece of the story puzzle being made...

Perhaps it would work.

houtex decided that he'd keep an eye on the subject.  "I can always come up with something to add.  I just need to be sure to not force it.  I wonder if there'll be any other intrigued parties to this?"

At that point, yet again, houtex realized he was talking out loud to himself.  I really need to stop that. he thought, then went to see the Word Association thread, but not before silently congratulating himself for the correct spelling of 'cornucopia'.

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Re: Anyone interested in doing an "Interactive Story"...?
« Reply #3 on: May 26, 2013, 03:21:26 PM »
Hey folks...

I've noticed there are at least a few writers around here that have done fan-fiction stories of their characters, and it looks like some are still writing them now, even though our city is gone(for the moment, but Icon is giving me renewed hope!), but I got to wondering recently if anyone around here would be interested in the idea of doing "interactive" stories?

I've done one before (I started it on my SG's forums, and it made it a good ways in before interest petered off leaving the story unfinished...), and it was fun to try and write a story that evolved as other people added their own elements.

What is an Interactive Story you ask? Well (the way I've done it at least), it's sort of a fan-fiction version of "roleplaying". Essentially, an overall plot is chosen, then one person writes a chapter for the story introducing said plot. Then another person/writer introduces their character/s to the story in a chapter they write, and try and expand on the plot or advance the story a little. Then the next person does the same. Chapters can be as long or as short as you want, but if you wish for other people to use your character in their writing, be sure to provide good descriptions of your character as you introduce them (or ask the owner of said character in a PM if you're unsure on a detail about their character. Interaction is half the fun!).

New people can chime in at any time, so there's no limit to how many can join or when. The overall idea is to collaboratively tell a complete story that everyone (people involved or readers) can enjoy.

Things to avoid would be obvious things like purposely killing off of another person's characters, "I win" characters who show up and end the story "cause they're uber brokenly awesome", or changing another person's character to be different from how they are described (turning a male character female, changing powers, personality, exc.).

It's a great writing exercise working around what other people are writing, and can be a lot of fun done right. So, would anyone around here be interested in such a thing?

I am game for this.  Start us off Shenku!  And for help with details of our characters, I happen to have this thread for us to fill out Character Bios if people would like.
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Re: Anyone interested in doing an "Interactive Story"...?
« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2013, 06:33:40 AM »
I haven't forgotten about this, I've just been busy with other stuff(mostly, I've been busy creating a super small and simple game to add to my portfolio...)...

Anyways, before we start, I'd like to settle a few ground rules to help us make this more concrete as to what we'll be writing, and to give you folks some ideas to adapt/create characters according to the world we'll be creating.

First, the story will NOT be taking place in Paragon City, or the City of Heroes universe. We'll be making up a new universe so we don't have to be restricted strictly to CoH lore with regards to enemies and historical events.

That said, this will be an "Alternate Earth" scenario, similar to that of CoH(Or Marvel/DC universes as well, technically), in which Heroes have been around since around World War II, so Superheroes are not unheard of, and in fact quite a few can and do publicly exist with community support("Superman-type"), though "Batman-types" who walk the finer line outside the law do exist as well. We'll be making characters in-between. We're not the well known Role Model heroes, nor are we the infamous vigilantes. We're the other guys who don't get any recognition, but do all the dirty work the bigger heroes don't do. ("Mystery Men-types", though not as cheesy and useless power-wise...)

I suggest, keeping the above in mind, that you all create a new character/s for this story, rather than reuse an existing one. You don't have to make up a new character if you don't want to, but I think that it's good practice to come up with something new once in a while.

Speaking of which, keep your powers within reason, and within theme! No "I make you're head explode with my mind, I win!" powers! >:( We need to be able to actually do battle, struggle, and overcome our opponents, not simply walk through them like a cat at a mouse convention... Overpoweredness gets boring to write/read about, but don't be too underpowered either! No one wants a useless Aquaman on their team...

All that sound good to everyone, or do you all have any input on changes to that you think should be made?

If there's no objections, I'll try and get started on the intro chapter tomorrow and post it in a new thread once it's done. I'd like for us to use this thread to do any OOC discussion(Plot points, comments, character information, exc.) so we can keep the Story thread clutter free to make for easier navigation/reading for anyone who's joining in or simply reading along as we add stuff. Sound good?

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Re: Anyone interested in doing an "Interactive Story"...?
« Reply #5 on: May 30, 2013, 02:34:14 PM »
This my happy face. ;D

I do like the "Mystery men-Esque" feel.  Stories are more interesting when characters are not OP.  I'm going to assume the timeframe is semi-modern with the possibility for sci-fi tech, like most Super Hero stories.  Personally, I think the setting would be more interesting if it does take place in a real location, (e.g. Chicago, Tokyo) much like how Millenium City or Paragon City existed in real locations.

Will there be a significant event that will bring all of our characters together? 
Will there be a "Guild" of sorts to sanction Superheroes and their actions?

Also, should we put our character bios in this thread?
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Re: Anyone interested in doing an "Interactive Story"...?
« Reply #6 on: May 30, 2013, 05:04:05 PM »
This my happy face. ;D

I do like the "Mystery men-Esque" feel.  Stories are more interesting when characters are not OP.  I'm going to assume the timeframe is semi-modern with the possibility for sci-fi tech, like most Super Hero stories.  Personally, I think the setting would be more interesting if it does take place in a real location, (e.g. Chicago, Tokyo) much like how Millenium City or Paragon City existed in real locations.

Will there be a significant event that will bring all of our characters together? 
Will there be a "Guild" of sorts to sanction Superheroes and their actions?

Also, should we put our character bios in this thread?

Yes, yes, yes, and yes.

I don't really know much about most of the various cities outside of Illinois, so I'd be tempted to lean towards an alternate-quasi-science fiction/modernish Chicago setting simply because it's what I'm most familiar with, so it'll be easier for me to reference places(Though that doesn't mean we'll be limited to only one city!)...

There will be some type of event to bring us all together, though what specifically I'm still thinking about(Likely your typical "crazy villain threatening to destroy the city" type deal, or something like).

Guilds/Supergroups? Some will already exist, i.e. this world's pompous Hero and Anti-Hero(read not-Superman and not-Batman) will have already formed a Super Society(A not-Justice League...), but we will not have one to start out with. Essentially, our heroes will be meeting for the first time, and will have to tackle the problem like a freshly formed PuG, drawn together as we all bump into each other trying to tackle the same problem.

And yes, place your bios here if you have them, unless you feel confident enough in your writing to give a good description in your first chapter and want the character to be a "pleasant surprise"(I'll be doing that to start out, but will add a bio here at a later date...). ;)

Oh, and feel free to use Icon to help you plan out what your character will look like or what powers they might have(Or make up your own powers!) and post a screenshot with your Bio if you like. :)

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Re: Anyone interested in doing an "Interactive Story"...?
« Reply #7 on: May 30, 2013, 06:36:05 PM »
I don't really know much about most of the various cities outside of Illinois, so I'd be tempted to lean towards an alternate-quasi-science fiction/modernish Chicago setting simply because it's what I'm most familiar with, so it'll be easier for me to reference places(Though that doesn't mean we'll be limited to only one city!)...
Coming from the south suburbs of Chi town, Chicago would be a winner for me!

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Also this is what I was thinking.
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Re: Anyone interested in doing an "Interactive Story"...?
« Reply #8 on: May 30, 2013, 06:58:17 PM »
Coming from the south suburbs of Chi town, Chicago would be a winner for me!
Also this is what I was thinking.

Chicago Area it is then. (North-West suburbs, myself)

Oh, and posting the first chapter shortly, let's have some fun with this. :D

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Re: Anyone interested in doing an "Interactive Story"...?
« Reply #9 on: May 30, 2013, 07:08:09 PM »
And the first chapter is up(link to the thread added in the first post of this thread). Get to writing folks! ;D

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« Reply #10 on: May 31, 2013, 03:45:06 PM »
Added my post.  I should have a bio up soon. :D
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« Reply #11 on: May 31, 2013, 05:06:33 PM »
whoops.  didnt read this thread first...put my vig stalker in.....is still cool?

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« Reply #12 on: May 31, 2013, 10:17:53 PM »
whoops.  didnt read this thread first...put my vig stalker in.....is still cool?

I see no issue with it, if that's the character you want to use. As I said above, I suggest using new characters, but that doesn't mean you have to. :)

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« Reply #13 on: June 02, 2013, 02:06:13 AM »
And I'm in. Just posted my character's intro. This could get interesting.
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« Reply #14 on: June 02, 2013, 04:24:53 AM »
I admit it... You guys are tempting me. The structure reminds me a lot of what we did back in the day with No Dead Trees.

But be warned, though, as a writer I'm rusty as all hell. It's been more than a year since I put anything more complex than a grocery list together.
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« Reply #15 on: June 02, 2013, 09:33:01 PM »
Jump on in Brightfire. It's just like falling off a bicycle while crossing a rusty steel bridge. There's no better way to get the writing muscles flexible again.
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« Reply #16 on: June 03, 2013, 04:13:26 AM »
But be warned, though, as a writer I'm rusty as all hell. It's been more than a year since I put anything more complex than a grocery list together.

A little rust never hurt anyone.

I haven't really written much of anything since around mid-late 2011, when I finished the first draft of my book, and also effectively killed off one of my main CoH characters for story reasons, but since C2E2 this past April, I've been hankering to write something. Anything. I just feel the need to write... I got about 4 and a half chapters written for my second book before I ran out of steam on it, but I still have the desire to write something, so I thought I'd try and get a group exorcize going or something... This doesn't need to be perfect, just fun, so don't feel it has to be good, just write anything. :)

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« Reply #17 on: June 04, 2013, 12:49:56 AM »
Every good hero team needs a gadgeteer, so Ace had joined the pursuit... Well, two of Ace's "Eights" have joined it, anyway. XD
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« Reply #18 on: June 04, 2013, 04:03:57 PM »
We have a pretty good start so far, now we just need to initiate the confrontation with these baddies...

Oh, and since there seems to be a little bit of confusion on the location of this particular chase, the robbery took place at the Donald E. Stephenson Convention Center in Rosemont(Western suburb of Chicago), which is just a little south of the new Rivers Casino in Des Plaines, which is where they'll be heading. Crooks and casinos, seemed like a good place for them to "hide"...

They're not going to make it inside the casino, however... ;)

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« Reply #19 on: June 04, 2013, 05:31:15 PM »
I'm wondering Shenku, did you leave me that opening?
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« Reply #20 on: June 04, 2013, 05:47:08 PM »
I was intentionally vague on details for the new comer, so that one of you folks could insert yourselves, yes.

I wasn't trying to be specific as to whom, which is why I described the character simply as a "dark figure". I figure, it's night time, and since it is raining now(due to Doctor Almost's "Rain" power), it'd make it hard to make out who's there at a quick glance. Feel free to run with it. :)

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« Reply #21 on: June 04, 2013, 06:01:39 PM »
ran.
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« Reply #22 on: June 04, 2013, 07:28:59 PM »
Hmm... I wonder what a sudden rain will do to Ace's drones... I must ponder this. XD
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« Reply #23 on: June 04, 2013, 08:12:56 PM »
Hmm... I wonder what a sudden rain will do to Ace's drones... I must ponder this. XD

Well, it's a localized rain, just over the parking lot pretty much. Think of it kinda like the power Freezing Rain, only not really cold ot slippery, just wet.

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« Reply #24 on: June 04, 2013, 08:19:18 PM »
Well, it's a localized rain, just over the parking lot pretty much. Think of it kinda like the power Freezing Rain, only not really cold ot slippery, just wet.
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« Reply #25 on: June 04, 2013, 10:37:34 PM »
It's been too long since I watched that movie...

I suppose I ought to post a bit about Ace at some point. The basic idea is pilot and inventor/gadgeteer with some level of machine telepathy. (If you're familiar with a tabletop RPG called Shadowrun, she's pretty much a Rigger without the cybernetic implants. When she's in control of a machine, like her aircraft, she more or less *is* that machine.)

The Model 88s are small drones with various functions... There are four of them, but 88-4 is a bit of a weirdness magnet. It's almost always down for repairs because it got into something it ought not have. (Its AI is a little more advanced than the others... Just enough to have developed an independent sense of curiosity.  ;D)

The Boss? I'm still pondering him. I have a few ideas about the guy, but hopefully the details will come along as we go. He seems to have pulled Ace out of some serious trouble in the past, though. I get the feeling her background may have been a little shady before she met him.
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« Reply #26 on: June 06, 2013, 04:23:42 AM »
These Bad Luck guys are harsh. 'Setting up their own guys to get blown sky high right along with the random hero-types? That's just rude.  :o

And you can bet Ricky and Dingo and company are definitely NOT going to be happy campers when they find out about it, either! Talk about incentive to turn state's evidence... ("All the better for us", Ace's boss says. "Interrogations can be such a messy business.." XD)
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« Reply #27 on: June 07, 2013, 02:23:10 PM »
I'm waiting for Shenku to make a post. 8)
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« Reply #28 on: June 08, 2013, 12:12:01 AM »
I'm waiting for Shenku to make a post. 8)

You guys can keep going if you want. I've been kind of busy with other stuff (mostly been trying to get an inventory system to work in UDK for a game I'm tinkering with, but also creating a functional language for my next book, school stuff, work stuff, exc.), and haven't been able to sit down to write anything further just yet.

You guys can make my characters do stuff if you need, and just write from your perspectives, I'll just improvise off of what's happened when I get to writing again. (Part of the fun, is you don't always have full control over your characters when someone else is writing! That's what makes it interesting; seeing what other people would do with your character. :P )

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« Reply #29 on: July 23, 2013, 05:27:53 AM »
Posted a new bit, hope no one minds, but I thought it was time to introduce a real villainous threat, and not simply thugs. You know, something that might make these heroes want to find out who she is, and how to stop her, and maybe result in them actually working together to uncover her forthcoming plots....

Possible Spoiler alert! Read this only after you've read my last post in the story thread!
Spoiler for Hidden:
FYI, her name is subject to change, which is why I had the bit there where Doctor Almost was laughing at her hysterically over her name, which will likely prompt her to change it... As for the part of him resisting the silence spell, I'm not 100% sure which direction I'm going with it yet, but it's either part of a protective spell on him from Crimson Maiden, or a natural ability of his that he doesn't know about but is largely useless...

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« Reply #30 on: July 23, 2013, 02:11:33 PM »
Shortcutted things a bit but I don't think it'll hurt the momentum any.
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« Reply #31 on: July 24, 2013, 05:29:31 PM »
IT LIVES!  8)

I decided to go a little magic-a-la-Dresden with Ace's gear. Building things in a way that resists disruption via arcane energy isn't something she typically thinks about, so it's a bit of a weak spot.

And her boss is essentially offering the group "home office" as a base of operations. (I have only a vague idea of what the place is like, aside from it not actually being an office.) They're a small operation... just the two of them... so I'm thinking more along the lines of a warehouse on the waterfront if we want to go low-end, or the top floor of some building down-town if we prefer something higher-rent. It could really go either way given Ace's background vs. his.

I'll get into more detail about Ace's boss once we're in a position to really introduce him. I think he'll be good entertainment.
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« Reply #32 on: July 24, 2013, 09:10:15 PM »
Sorry again about the delay, but as I said, you guys can keep going with out me if need be if you have ideas and want to keep going, that's kinda the point of it being "interactive". If I don't post for a while, just treat my characters like D&D NPC's that are tagging along with the group. :P

Side note, "Darkheart Angel's" first costume (post prison uniform) is based off a doodle I did a few months ago and recently turned into a 3D model... Been trying to come up with interesting designs for an "arch mage sorceress" type of look, and this is the most recent one... I'll see if I can upload a render or two in a little bit so you folks have a better idea of how she looked... But as mentioned by others in their response chapters, her magical wardrobe can be extensive, and will likely change for the final big showdown (especially since I admit the costume design is not that great...).

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Re: Interactive Story: Discussion Thread
« Reply #33 on: July 25, 2013, 12:07:39 AM »
Not to double post, but here's a quick series of renders... Bare in mind, it's only a first pass on a potential design I was toying with, I'm personally not that pleased with it... (Textures could use tons more love, polycount is ridiculously high for the hair because of the transparent spikes in the buns {nearly double the entire rest of the mesh in fact}, and the costume design itself feels like it's lacking something that makes it stand out as unique...) But this should at least give you guys an idea of what I was trying to describe...


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Re: Interactive Story: Discussion Thread
« Reply #34 on: August 01, 2013, 02:04:14 PM »
I'm going with the vampiric powers infusion giving Dani an inherent magical resistance, albeit one that requires some thinking to draw on....

Mainly, I guess, power-wise, think Buffy the Vampire Slayer (less strength buff more agility buff, though), but with Wolverine/Sabretooth/Deadpool style healing. 

If that makes sense to y'all?

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Re: Interactive Story: Discussion Thread
« Reply #35 on: August 01, 2013, 02:32:21 PM »
Do your thing Gunbunny. As long as it flows, it's good.
As long as somebody keeps making up stories for it, the City isn't gone.

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Re: Interactive Story: Discussion Thread
« Reply #36 on: August 01, 2013, 04:17:58 PM »
Word. ^_^
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Re: Interactive Story: Discussion Thread
« Reply #37 on: August 07, 2013, 03:32:28 PM »
Well, somebody do something In-Character, been almost a week since I posted...:P

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Re: Interactive Story: Discussion Thread
« Reply #38 on: August 08, 2013, 07:03:52 PM »
I need to go out and mow my little patch of lawn before lions and antelopes start to move in, but once that's done I'll post for Ace at least.

My only plan is to move her back to "home office" and intro her boss... sort of, anyway ;D... but at least that'll advance time a bit, and break up the current scene.

ETA: And... done! Go figure. The gadget-girl's boss isn't human.  8)
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